Excerpt:
Suddenly, the air in the warehouse lit up
like a Christmas tree before being sucked into a hole of darkness,
taking with it the blue swirls. It was like it crumpled in on itself.
Gateway To Hell
Then,
it was dark. Daniel blinked, adjusting his eyes. The day had come and
gone, but they hadn’t noticed, what with the illumination from the
gateway and Zeta.
Daniel glanced at his father, and as one they rushed through the door, towards her.
“Zeta?” He touched her shoulder as he crouched next to her.
Nothing.
No response. Her eyes were now closed. No light shone from them or from
her. Her hair now appeared limp and lifeless, her skin pale without the
rosy patches he had noticed earlier.
His heart slammed into his chest. God, don’t let her be dead.
As if reading his thoughts, Mike felt for her pulse. He nodded. “Slow, but steady.”
Daniel
let out a gush of air in relief. He reached out and touched her check
with the back of his hand. Her skin was silky smooth and soft but cold.
She looked fragile, but she had just got rid of six Zell Demons, almost
single-handily. She was bound to be wiped out.
She had proved to him she was a warrior, all right.
“We should get her back to base,” his dad said.
Daniel
nodded and handed his weapons over. They didn’t say a word as Daniel
lifted Zeta into his arms. She felt light, and he knew from her
self-mocking earlier, she wasn’t. Right now, it was almost like she
floated to him.
Could it be an aspect of the gateway? Some residual energy?
He
carried her to the truck, gently placing her in the back seat, covering
her with a blanket, before jumping in next to her. His dad would drive.
There was no way he would be able to concentrate.
No way he could leave her alone. She’d done more than her part. It was
time someone looked after her, and he had a feeling that usually didn’t
happen. How did she come to be alone with no one to watch her back? The
thought irked him and he wondered why. He knew of Warders that liked to
work on their own.
Was it because she was a woman? No, female Warders, like his cousin, could hold their own. Was it because it was Zeta?
Daniel
pushed the thoughts away as he pulled Zeta against him, making her as
comfortable as he could for the half hour drive back to their base.
Somehow he doubted she would recover in that time.
Dread ran over him. Would she recover at all?
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Hmm, Eleni - I think you're gonna give Stephen King a run for his money one day! Keep up the good work! Cheers!
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ReplyDeleteOh Sharon, what a compliment. Wow. Thank you very much.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting Sharon and Martin.
The excerpt was excellent and thanks, Julie, for this great event.
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ReplyDeleteGreat excerpt, Eleni. Poor Zeta...
ReplyDeleteOh wow. I honestly was just browsing through the site and read this and was like, "dang, now I have to read this book" cause that sounds really good!
ReplyDeleteThanks George, Lisa, Keith , and Jamie. Much appreciated.
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